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November 2013


Chapter 9 Revisions

The beginning few pages of Chapter 9 have been rewritten (finally) to greatly embellish the kidnapping of the character “Slave”. The idea was to create more conflict between the boys versus the mob with a goal of holding the reader captive more. This should also help to further build the anticipated tension for the baseball game soon to come. Hope my readers enjoy the changes! I, myself, am very excited!